In many countries, rural people are moving to the cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. (increasing urban population) Is this a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, with the economic development, more and more people who wish they would have a better life, are moving to live in the big cities. This trend affects the human resources in suburban areas, resulting in population boom in the metropolices. I am of the opinion that this issue has some benefits, I would argue that there are more drawbacks.
On the one hand, this matter brings some advantages of human resources for manual work. For example, more than 50% of blue-collar workers in many factories and industrial areas are from rural areas, who are the main workers enjoying creating goods and products. Moreover, migration to urban areas will have more places to build industrial zones and factories in these areas. If plants move to suburban areas, the rate of air pollution in the cities will be reduced, which helps the residents enjoy the fresh air.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that there are many disadvantages of this trend. Migration to urban areas increases the density of populations in the city, which leads to many matters that should be addressed. For example, the government has to deal with the accommodation for their residents, because of more citizens and less space for living. A large number of buildings will be built, leading to increased air pollution, light pollution and noise pollution. Additionally, the agriculture industry will be impacted heavily by the shortage of farmers that results from the city migration trend. For instance, Canada has a profitable import and export in agriculture due to immigrants doing it instead of local people. However, if people who came from overseas did not work in farms, Canada's economy will suffer from some restrictions in agriculture.
In conclusion, although migration to the metropics brings some benefits, this trend affect seriously the economy and the environment of the cities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11974110032 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72901705095 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0531752453 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163733365608 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559733512333 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462671577757 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980377322662 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250956504006 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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