In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this state - of- the -art era, the living standard is higher and higher while people’s demands are more and more diverse. That results in the fact that money becomes what very important which can control most of the things in our life and that most people do not merely work to make their end needs but for higher demands. So it cannot be denied that in some country there are some people earn unbelievably high salaries. Some people think that it is a blessing for a country which wants to grow more, but others argue that there should be a law to control salaries under a proper maximum level.
On the one hand, such an opinion that people should be paid as high salaries as possible results for various reasons. First of all, people who are highly skilled and talented or work hard should be paid worthy salaries. This not only stimulates the working spirit of them but also is a smart way that a company uses to retain good employers. To make it more clearly, apart from their real passion for their jobs, when having a high income, such good staff can completely meet their higher demands so that they feel more satisfied with their lives and have more inspiration to continue the tasks well. That is also one of the reasons why they are loyal to their companies. Secondly, a high salary is also a method approved by economists that can stimulate growth and production in the national economy. Because residents can pay for luxurious products and services so that industry and services can develop more. This leads to a more prosperous economy than of some other countries.
On the other hand, there are also many reasons resulting in the opinion that employee remuneration should be capped at a certain level. While some people have extraordinarily high salaries, many people are still struggling to earn little salaries and face poverty. That causes a great gap between the rich and the poor and social injustice as well. Children from poor families can approach the best education and even they have to miss their education path to work hard and help their parents. Moreover, such generations who are not taught well to become good citizens and have chances to develop their careers tend to commit the law and become criminals. Therefore, the general population can experience an improved standard of living if the Government has policíes to ensure that wealth is distributed throughout the country.
In conclusion, the fact that people are paid well which is worth their efforts is a good sign of a wealthy country while there are also reasons supporting that the authorities should enact the law to control the maximum salaries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81578947368 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42375115578 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493421052632 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7462814769 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.578947368 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256341063668 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881018856317 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082890981383 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17423121161 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045486325084 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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