In many countries smoking in now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, smoking in open area is illegal in some nations. This argument is true because public area is not only for smokers and the smoke from cigarettes tend to damage quality of air in the public space.
Public spaces is area for all of citizens and the smokers apparently should be banned. Besides that, some nations have provided special spaces for smokers, therefore they have to use the areas to smoke. Evidently, based on research in 2015 by student of Tubingen university in sophisticated countries such as German and England have warned their citizens for smoking in the open space and have existed 3 smoking areas in the each of public spaces. This events have been making the vibes of open spaces feel comfortable.
When it comes to smokers in the open spaces, smoke from cigarettes will damage quality of air because it has contained dangerous materials such as nicotine, carbon monoxide, TAR, and arsenic. These materials can cause serious health problems like cancer and asthma. For example, the number smokers that continued to increase in Indonesia and the less of control by government had caused significantly a decline of air quality, this phenomena also showed an increase of the number of cancer and asthma. This conditions definitely affected environment, especially about air quality that can impact to other sectors.
In conclusion, usage of public spaces to all citizens and condition of air quality are main reason why smoking in the area is illegal. If it is possible, these issues have to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04330708661 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59994288772 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5729567767 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114508849174 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478126177243 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502140474332 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848232463773 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512562454623 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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