In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular.
Why do you think these book and TV shows are popular?
What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV drama?
Recently, many countries have become worried about crime stories and TV crime show. Besides, this trend took a place worldwide with a massive negative effect. Crime affects badly on society. This essay will take a look on reasons that is cause crime, and how it influence on people`s attitude.
Not only crime book but also TV broadcast plays a crucial role on crime rate increasing. In addition, children gain badly effect from these sources. This issue becomes worldwide because people spent many time watching aggressive broadcasts or reading negative thoughts, and they concentrate on crime`s methods. Otherwise, countries get used to putting restrictions to decrease and prevent crimes. Evidently, crime novels and TV shows become popular due to lower level of education.
Nowadays, crime stories and TV crime episodes have replaced by video game, social media, and platforms. Additionally, new technology and smart phones extend crime ratio rapidly. For instance, many children and adults abuse their smart phones to play violent games, and they share this bad experience with each other. In contrast, many parents protect their family from publish crime attitude by follow up their smart phones and prevent them from watching crime broadcasts. Equally important, crime behavior will be reduced by well-educated people.
To conclude, many countries announced that crime stories and TV crime show take a part on people`s daily life. Also, its effects should be changed positively.
From our prospective, after awareness campaigns, countries should prevent crime shows and novels. Finally, well education could eliminate bad effects from those.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, look, so, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63241106719 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66458281205 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4360204753 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0555555556 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350854685436 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121600774789 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114314179425 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213505946446 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076603006898 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.78 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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