Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people think that corporation and industries ,it would be better to be located in regional areas than in urban areas. I would argue that this shifting could have more benefits than drawbacks. People will benefit more if big organizations and industries relocated in suburbs area.
There are several drawbacks for the presence of the megacorp and industries in the centre of cities. This is because of the increasing number of people that would be visiting to perform their work which will definitely lead to increase both congestion and pollution . These problems, especially air, water and soil contamination can easily affect negatively on people's health and can cause a severe diseases. For instance , in our city we suffer from the overcrowded streets and the rising amount of pollution which make people live under continuous pressure and the percentage of people with severe illnesses went high dramatically. In Brief, if the big companies and industries moved to the rural areas, it would have more privileges for people.
In spite of the drawbacks ,however, there are many advantages for being the massive companies and industries are situated outside the centre of cities. One of the obvious reasons is that will help in develop the rural areas by opening new industries which will offer Job opportunities that can lead to less poverty. In addition, this shifting can reduce the waste of these industries because they will have enough space for the disposal of their waste. Furthermore, the factory pollution can affect water, air and soil, so it's preferred to these factories to be located in the countryside's to protect the population located in the center of cities.
In conclusion, this move will make cities more clean, less polluted and less crowded because it will encourage some people to live in suburbs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18791946309 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69576622791 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6303876719 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255506677266 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994453591059 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967237163131 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156156123351 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795226458506 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.