In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, that many urban dwellers are likely to live alone or in nuclear families has aroused people’s discussion. From my perspectives, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
An array of merits of this trend can be identified. First, since people choose to live on their own, they will become more independent and self-reliant than those living with family members. Young adults, for example, have to learn how to cook, clean, pay bills and manage their budget, which helps them develop valuable life skills. Second, if more and more people opt for living alone, this trend will result in greater demand for housing. In fact, the housing stock has been inadequate to cope with this demand, which is conductive to estate agents and homeowners who are of great benefit from raising house prices and rents.
Nevertheless, there are negative aspects of this trend. First, by living alone, people might experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. This means that they miss out the emotional support from their family, meanwhile they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities, which could make them become more stressed, leading to some mental problems. Second, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. Although this may benefit some businesses, it is also one of contributing factors making people be faced with rising living costs.
In conclusion, the rise in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23228346457 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65462080042 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9867159875 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213018714307 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827460459494 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592353688885 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12767649553 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812355989619 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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