In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
It is true that the number of people who live alone or in nuclear family units increased gradually for these days and individuals has no tendency to live in large families as much as they used to be. This is a quite negative trend and several reasons will be given below.
There are several reasons why people want to live alone or small family units. First and foremost, individuals have adversely effect on individuals mind due to the fact that people who live in extended family have less workload housework and even sometimes none.As a result of that people have more free time to concentrate on their own life, thus,it is likely to give happiness and ,of course, they feel much better than who live in alone. Another reason is that life expenditure has been increasing and this is reflected on rental fee, shopping expense and other bills so that individuals affected adversely both physically and mentally. If people live in large families, they will have less load on mentally and physically because families already crowded no need for paying bills or sometimes they can pay less.
Parents who grew up their children by the small family have many problems. Nowadays parents should be worked in somewhere caused by increasing life expenses and that means children maybe live alone in the home. These sort of children who not be educated by their parents have tended to become involved a crime, to live in a virtual life and so on. As a result of that children can become dangerous individuals in the society but children who live in extended family can not be alone owning to crowded family these will be a great positive impact on their mind and even if their parents work because in the extended family always have someone to take care of these children.
In conclusion, I believe that people who lived lonely and nuclear family have a negative trend, they should be live in an extended family or not be alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, thus, even so, in conclusion, of course, sort of, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74626865672 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39101682582 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5305124576 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.545454545 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302164107706 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139435820484 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837058097144 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224210339516 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048592038651 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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