Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
More crimes are committed by prisoners when they get out of jails. This problem happens due to several reasons, some can be related to the poverty, the community and the environment surrounding. Furthermore, it can also be because of lack of faith and satisfaction. Indeed, all of this has numerous effects on criminals, which are going to affect the whole society in parallel.
In my point of view, no one is born a criminal, but sometimes life dominate some people to do awful things and sometimes they are illegal. One of the causes that can make the criminal come back to do nasty things even after getting out of jail is running out of money without any kind of financial support from the government and the community that he used to live in, so the only solution he sees is to raid. Moreover, being hopeless and discontentment can be one of the worst causes to make criminals to back again their dreadful habits.
This problem has many unpleasant effects on society as the number of crimes increases dramatically with increasing the number of prisons, it is a direct proportion, which can lead to increase level of criminality and murdering. And this creates and spreads a state of uncomfortable, unbalanced and unsafe environment among citizens. If the government with the police didn’t find appropriate and quick solution to end up this problem, certainly mess would be everywhere.
To sum up, life is not fair enough for some people and it can make them commit horrible crimes due to different reasons, and the government engaged in this problem as well, and they have to bring up some ideal solutions to eradicate this problem which has an enormous effect on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7588045607 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0812214057 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232525213726 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837046225621 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050412643457 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140302033206 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309161568153 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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