Some people argue that it is important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... satisfactory job is far more vital for ones life as distinct from getting a handsom...
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Suggestion: However
...distinct from getting a handsome salary.However,others think that monetary motivation i...
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...t from getting a handsome salary.However,others think that monetary motivation is impor...
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...tant in order to lead a satisfying life.To my mind,without personal happiness bein...
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...der to lead a satisfying life.To my mind,without personal happiness being affluent would...
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...eing affluent would be nonsense and this,in turn,can create some dissatisfaction on...
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...luent would be nonsense and this,in turn,can create some dissatisfaction on jobs inv...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
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...action can be more crucial basis for an individuals life rather than a bunch of money.Here ...
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...duals life rather than a bunch of money.Here I am referring to the fact that providi...
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... people do not enjoy what they are doing,it is unlikely for them to work efficientl...
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...iciently even though they are paid well.For that reason it job satisfaction may ran...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
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...h they are paid well.For that reason it job satisfaction may rank upper place for ...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...that reason it job satisfaction may rank upper place for some individuals lives. ...
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...ey people are enabled to enjoy something as most of things are measured as well a...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
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...ople are enabled to enjoy something as most of things are measured as well as depended on th...
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...s most of things are measured as well as depended on this.To be precise, one can ...
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...e measured as well as depended on this.To be precise, one can not live life to th...
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...l, so long as they are in need of money.In that case people opt for working anywhe...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
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...ey are not delighted in doing them. As far as I am concerned personal happines...
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... the major thing in terms of profession.In other words,If people do some work that...
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...ng in terms of profession.In other words,If people do some work that they dislike,t...
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...If people do some work that they dislike,they can be easily fed up with that and it ...
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...ey can be easily fed up with that and it can trigger to quit that job afterwards ...
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...of its nutritious salary. To conclude,for some the most important thing can be jo...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Personally
...others when it comes to monetary motive.Personally,it is much more crucial for ones to be ...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...n it comes to monetary motive.Personally,it is much more crucial for ones to be sat...
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Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...t they are doing than earning much money by doing things unfamiliar as well as un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, as well as, in other words, in spite of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91379310345 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03804845364 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9070150422 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 285.0 106.682146367 267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 20.7667163134 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.4 7.06120827912 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16854814128 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104417482161 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342447098009 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104417482161 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342447098009 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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