Some people argue that it is important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
During the life of people, life is consist of working, hometime, resting, traveling and other activities. Work is a major part of people life so it would be enjoyable, so salary of job must be enought to satisfy to needs people. Enjoyable job and good salary job are really important things for process life peole's. In this essay both of category will discuss. Enjoyable job services for employers as a energy source and good salary is a way satisfaction from job.
Most of people prefer to work which is about their interest. They think interesting job are more enjoyable and easy. If people work a enjoyable job, they feel them as a bird in their work and they never tire, so they can solve easily from thier work. They love their job, this thing motivate them to work strongly.
On the other hand, good salary job is admited as a key to start beatiful life by most of succesful people. It is argued that good salary job forward to valuable time so that employers satisfy from their job cause of high salary. Likewise, work efficence is depend on cost os job. Finance has main role of life, it roles mainly to live, employers would try to work hard confidently with a good salary. Because they believe this they have chance to good lifestyle.
In conclusion, both of views are signifjcant things of job selection. I think, good salary is important than enjoyable job. Thus, valuable job can create prefect life as person wanted. Enjoying job could manage to build the best life for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
During the life of people, life is consist of working, hometime, resting, travelin...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'need'.
Suggestion: need
...ry of job must be enought to satisfy to needs people. Enjoyable job and good salary j...
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Line 1, column 402, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...Enjoyable job services for employers as a energy source and good salary is a way ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ary is a way satisfaction from job. Most of people prefer to work which is about their int...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...more enjoyable and easy. If people work a enjoyable job, they feel them as a bird...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...igh salary. Likewise, work efficence is depend on cost os job. Finance has main role o...
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Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rk hard confidently with a good salary. Because they believe this they have chance to g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, really, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69318181818 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38271426104 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.047481351 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284017339212 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113090537374 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837943745222 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198735572989 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780174280942 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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