Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
In the meantime, more and more criminal acts committed by perpetrators who have already been in prison. This issue will cite significant causes and effects on social response which will be eliminated in the forthcoming paragraph.
To begin with, the convicted criminals probably struggle to adapt with society as the perception of being criminal is hard to get rid of. This more likely leads the difficulty to find workplace to afford their living, so that, the only way to fulfill a proper life is through committing another crime. Furthermore, prisons barely provide proper rehabilitation to prepare the law breakers coming back to the society. In fact, they become more violent than before, since they meet the same peers as other criminal records. The recidivism, eventually, establishes gangster after they have released from jail to convict other more serious crimes.
Conversely, the detrimental effect of this might affect the victim being traumatized and anxious to socialize with people. This seemingly makes them more unaware to help stranger who is in trouble. In worst case, this impacts on humanitarian crisis in which they barely care for their surroundings. In addition, security officer image will probably degrade as an impact of social distrust to them. This is because the high social perception of ex-criminal would harm their life even if the security system was advanced in many of potential crime zones. Consequently, vandalism will be normalized as self-defence act from criminality.
In conclusion, the remarkable reasons of criminals committing other crimes after being released from prison are economic factor and the few control of rehabilitation. However, the poor environment safety as well as the public trust doctrine become the severe impacts of this phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'In the worst'.
Suggestion: In the worst
...are to help stranger who is in trouble. In worst case, this impacts on humanitarian cris...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun control seems to be countable; consider using: 'few controls'.
Suggestion: few controls
...from prison are economic factor and the few control of rehabilitation. However, the poor en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42704626335 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86871150612 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5902237674 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307738453323 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921472721167 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413803319878 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188467267164 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191107684995 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.