Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Despite having had punishment, a vast majority of ex-convicts are likely to recommit crime. There are several underlying causes associated with this problem which will be discussed, along with some practical measurement to address this issue.
It is assumed that main factor leading to being engaged in criminal is poverty, unemployment and lack of sufficient education. Due to having criminal record, it is not acceptable for employer to hire a person imprisoning before. As a consequence, ex-convicts find it difficult to make a living and inevitably get involve again in unlawful activities to meet their basic needs. Moreover, current prison system can make the situation worse. Keeping with various types of lawbreakers, offenders are more likely to be influenced by others having violent behavior. For example, prisoners carrying out the petty crime like pick pocketing are being hold near those getting involved in the serious crime such as smuggling. As a result, their criminal intention is going to be strengthened even after releasing.
The main responsibility of solving this problem should be shouldered by the government. First of all, it is necessary to provide rehabilitation programs including vocational training and education. Having lucrative skills such as plumbing and welding just to name, they will be deterred to perpetrate crime again. In addition, developing a deeper understanding of correct moral behavior in prisoners can be considered to be a deterrent of recommitting in the future. As well as, supporting them when they are looking for accommodation and work is another measurement. This will give them a sense of satisfaction to choose correct way of life and change to a law-abiding citizen when they release into society.
To sum up, although there are various contributing factors to motivate ex-criminals to recommit crime, this problem can be tackled provided that the government takes it into account
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 623, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to correct'
Suggestion: to correct
... them a sense of satisfaction to choose correct way of life and change to a law-abiding...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44884488449 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0682421234 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620462046205 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.038031107 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249655867887 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073080961235 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422071265542 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146943847582 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00614921585934 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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