Many employers believe that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job, so they are employing people who are with good social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will no longer be necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
No one can deny the fact that the internet is widely used over the world. These days, people can use high technology to figure out anything. There is also a tendency for some individuals to believe that museums and galleries are unnecessary. I totally agree with this notion. In this essay, I will discuss two views on this problem.
On the one hand, with the development of high tech in the digital age, people can read and see everything we request using our cellphones. Furthermore, a few years ago, everyone visited the workplace of arts or the historical place all over the world by travelling as tourists. However, most people are satisfied simply watching the old building via the Youtube application and others. For example, one of the most famous vloggers on Youtube named KHOAI LANG THANG. He uses his channel to show people the places he visited, which led to him reaching more followers and viewers, all of which are available for free through an app.
On the other hand, others think travelling and being a tourist is enjoyable, and they like to pay for that. It is kind of a habit for someone to visit museums and galleries. In addition, each ancient place or object represents a milestone in the past and everyone can learn more about human history.
In conclusion, I believe it is not necessary to visit arts institutions in order to see historical items, however I can use technology to view and know about everything and anywhere on this planet.
- The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university 61
- People tend to work longer hours nowadays Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and the society so working hours should be restricted Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 56
- Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose Discuss both views and give your opinion 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83972125436 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67431079517 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9664017057 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.069204327826 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303236412313 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294608437976 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425115221987 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311004078185 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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