Many employers believe that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job, so they are employing people who are with good social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (job)
Nowadays, many recuiters highly apperciate people who have good socialise skills and they believe these skills are as significant as satisfactory qualification to succed in career. Im my opinion, I completely agree with this belief and the following essay will presenting my ideas and giving examples.
In terms of inhouse ineviroment in company, employees with social skill always certain that they bring a high quality asmosphere in the enterprise. First, they can easily get a long with peers so the terrory will extremely comfortable. For example, if you work in the company that everyone are very friendly so you can work with a mental comfort. Furthermore, employees with a good social skill can get adapt to new circumtance and they can teamwork more esier, so they can give the new idea, discuss and slove the problems quickly but still give the high quality result.
With respect to the reputation of the company, the enterprise that have a lot of employees capaple at social skill that will brings for the company great profit. For intance, if the enterprice have a importance contract with a strick customer so the one who can communicate greatly that can convince that customer and sign the contract. In addition, the employees with a good social can enchant the new customer and attract a lot of source of great invesment.
To sump up, the enterprise should hiring people who have good social skill because they will bring the comfort working asmosphere and good for the reputation of the company.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tory qualification to succed in career. Im my opinion, I completely agree with thi...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'present'
Suggestion: present
...his belief and the following essay will presenting my ideas and giving examples. In terms...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...it. For intance, if the enterprice have a importance contract with a strick custo...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of sources'.
Suggestion: a lot of sources
...an enchant the new customer and attract a lot of source of great invesment. To sump up, the en...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enterprise should hiring people who have good social skill because they will brin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, for example, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01587301587 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68737237271 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511904761905 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6146345315 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315096318213 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135670062127 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796853968874 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214895141025 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418800557858 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tory qualification to succed in career. Im my opinion, I completely agree with thi...
^^
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'present'
Suggestion: present
...his belief and the following essay will presenting my ideas and giving examples. In terms...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...it. For intance, if the enterprice have a importance contract with a strick custo...
^
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of sources'.
Suggestion: a lot of sources
...an enchant the new customer and attract a lot of source of great invesment. To sump up, the en...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enterprise should hiring people who have good social skill because they will brin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, for example, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01587301587 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68737237271 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511904761905 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6146345315 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315096318213 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135670062127 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796853968874 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214895141025 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418800557858 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.