Many employers believe that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job, so they are employing people who are with good social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree
With the inexorable increase in the influx of graduates with bachelor's degrees, social skills have emerged as a topic of interest. It is sometimes argued that not only good qualifications but also good social skills are the main determinants of success. Personally, I totally agree that social skills are also at the core of life-work.
There are many compelling reasons why employers give precedence to people with good skills. Firstly, social skills such as communication skills and teamwork skills are attributed to life experiences, which are built up from old projects or vocational training courses. Therefore, people who have social skills would have the ability to solve problems more effectively than bachelor's degree holders without practical skills. Moreover, people with social skills would be easier to adapt to the jobs as well as the new environment.
Secondly, because of the influx of graduates, the labor market has become more competitive as it is, even for job seekers with qualifications. Therefore, employers would place heavy emphasis on practical skills more than the bachelor's degrees, which are less necessary since the growth of university enrollments
In conclusion, there is no doubt about good social skills are as foremost as good qualifications. It is clear that in the next few years, the value of qualifications will decline beside the increase of graduates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40182648402 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96526741213 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584474885845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3674021146 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.3 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419999440908 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16491120084 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878302011677 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246186733065 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989694105358 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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