Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.
Nowadays, there are lots of family who like to move from one nation to others. This leads certain members of the community opine that it may bring benefits for children. However, other opposes this idea. Hence, to settle the dispute, a further discussion will be given below.
To begin with, if students keep moving countries during the formal education period, they tend to have less friends. It may happen since they have a relatively short period of time to know each other and a cultural shock. This has been acknowledged by one of my cousin who keeps moving continents.
On the other hand, changes own its benefits and drawbacks. Although individuals will have less friends, they certainly able to speak many languages. For instance, one of my neighbor, John, are able to speak six languages from six countries which he had ever lived. He said that he must learn those local dialect in order to purchase, bargain, and make friends. Needless to say, moving to several countries will let individuals to learn more language since the surroundings force them to do so.
Additionally, one will know more cultures which can eventually enhance one’s developments. What I mean by this is one can learn positive habit and studying style that is not common in one’s country. A typical example is people from my country, Indonesia, who study abroad can solve problems from a totally different point of view and also able to submit the given task on time. These are things that cannot be done by Indonesian. Clearly, having to move countries in a young age, one may become a better person due to more positive habits which can be learned from various cultures.
To conclude, after having some points above, even though moving to various countries will make one to have fewer friends, the benefits from other perspective outweigh its drawbacks. This is mainly due to their ability to speak more languages and think from lots of points of views.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ppen since they have a relatively short period of time to know each other and a cultural shock...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, i mean, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93636363636 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52313628498 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2922860244 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7368421053 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227290367589 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671422090826 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469002763402 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130614637771 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588639425571 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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