In some countries, many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say that it is because parents spend much of their time at work, not at home. Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, the rate of social problems causes by teenagers escalates in some nations. This leads to a recent argument among the community saying that the reason for this is demanding jobs own by parents. However, other opposes this idea. Hence, to settle the dispute, a balanced reasoning will be given below.
To begin with, it is acknowledgeable that the working hours of both parents contribute to the increasing number of inappropriate cases committed by teenagers. This may happen since parents are too busy to provide guidance and education about good and bad habits. Consequently, this might cause their grown-up children to pursue illegal activities without knowing the consequences. Needless to say, parents demanding schedule do play a role in causing juvenile delinquency.
On the other hand, there are other factors like the existence of social media which leads to this issue.
This is mainly due its capability in letting youngsters to obtain inappropriate and uncensored information within seconds. Thus, making them to try dangerous activities shown there, such as the choking game and the kiki challenge. Clearly, unfiltered social media certainly harm the future generations by leading them to activities which violate the law.
Additionally, these days, school are too focus on teaching students subjects related with the future career, for example, science, business, accounting, economic, and programming. Subsequently, making important subjects like morality and manner to be forgotten. Due to this, youngsters will be less aware with the danger harmful activities like consuming narcotics and conducting bullies. Obviously, the shift in school curriculum causes children to know less about the detrimental impacts of doing not ethic and not healthy things.
To conclude, after having some points above, even though the demanding jobs of parents contributes to social problems conducted by teenagers, there are other factors which are more prominent. These are the emerging of social media and the change in school curriculum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to focus'?
Suggestion: to focus
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Line 8, column 42, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'focused', 'focussed'.
Suggestion: focused; focussed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5910543131 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85206005326 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613418530351 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.944769805 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119943950839 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036842873864 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468868653029 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063309989177 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496273307995 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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