Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is observed that many popular athletes are promoting sports goods. This trend, albeit having some potential benefits, can bring with it several negative effects.
Granted, there are numerous advantages that come with well-known sports players endorsing sports products. To begin with, sports stars can easily earn large amounts of money from advertising, as seen in the case of Cristiano Ronaldo, a prominent football player who makes tens of millions of dollars per year just from his endorsements. This opportunity encourages less popular players to work hard to become famous, thus improving the quality of sports games and benefiting the world of sports as a whole. In addition, given that fans tend to trust their favourite athletes, they are likely to purchase the products they endorse, hence more profits for companies and more advertisement offers for athletes. They may also feel more confident and play sports more frequently when they are wearing the same sports shoes or using the same equipment as their idols, thus boosting their physical health and well-being.
However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Firstly, some products advertised by sports players may not be healthy and trustworthy. For instance, some athletes promote instant weight loss pills and supplements, which can have numerous adverse effects on their users’ health, namely restlessness and high blood pressure. Therefore, fans who buy such products may face dangerous health problems, which would deal a blow to the athletes’ reputation. Secondly, some sports stars may become too occupied with their endorsements and gradually spend less time training and brushing up on their skills. This can negatively affect their performance and worsen the quality of their games, causing their fame to diminish. To illustrate, the 2018 Vietnamese U23 football team gained immense popularity after a series of impressive achievements, but many of its members quickly got worse and lost their prominence after they agreed to endorse too many brands and corporations.
In summary, it is my conviction that the advantages of the current trend of famous athletes advertising sports products pale in comparison with its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48850574713 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76464261305 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623563218391 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0391133247 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321171256279 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116766279584 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990920560166 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207256685557 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636760235529 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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