Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, although sugar is one of the most harmful substances which can cause various diseases all manufactures use high levels of sugar to product food and drink.In my opinion, one way for preventing sugary foods and drinks consumption is increasing these goods and I strongly agree with this issue.
As a good reason if a person consumes high levels of sugar either daily or weekly makes many health problems. Not only has bad affect in log term and causes different blood illness such as blood sugar, diabetes, and increase fat but also, in short term has dangerous effect on your heart and might heat attack. Hence, people should try to control their sugar consumption and have a sugar diet for most of their food or drink consume.
Another point is companies and productor which product sugary drinks and food can raise price of drinks and food which used more sugar. all companies should notice to people health and must care about it. they can set a rule if the sugar exceeded the limit people should pay extra money for drink or food. This makes people reduce them consume high levels of sugar.
In conclusion, although sugary drinks are harmful for health people like them and if use these goods make addicted to them. It made several various sugar diseases that in the future will harm themselves. One way that can prevent of consumption of people is expensive the price sugary goods. With this method most of people don’t use it except their passion.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...vels of sugar to product food and drink.In my opinion, one way for preventing suga...
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Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... many health problems. Not only has bad affect in log term and causes different blood ill...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
... drinks and food which used more sugar. all companies should notice to people healt...
^^^
Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...he price sugary goods. With this method most of people don’t use it except their passion.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople don’t use it except their passion.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82213438735 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25796546395 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4372615497 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394598588532 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144525862426 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809798002297 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246486378168 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731369599963 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...vels of sugar to product food and drink.In my opinion, one way for preventing suga...
^^
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... many health problems. Not only has bad affect in log term and causes different blood ill...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
... drinks and food which used more sugar. all companies should notice to people healt...
^^^
Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...he price sugary goods. With this method most of people don’t use it except their passion.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople don’t use it except their passion.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82213438735 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25796546395 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4372615497 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394598588532 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144525862426 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809798002297 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246486378168 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731369599963 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.