Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
It is obvious that manufacturing a large number of products such as food and drink containing high levels of sugar causes numerous health problems. In addition, sugary products ought to be made more expensive to reduce consuming sugar efficiency. Personally, I completely agree with this statement, as I believe that, eating much sugar not only brings a detrimental effect on people’s health but also causes obesity.
First, sugar is deemed an indispensable spice in every dish, so, with the advance in sugar, consumers can easy to find it at any grocery store or any store in the market. All food is nearly added to sugar, people especially youngsters tended to be keen on sweets leading to the rate of diabetics increasing, besides that, diabetes might cause obesity nowadays. As a result, diabetes is still considered an alarming “non-communicable pandemic” globally. For instance, according to statics from the International Diabetes Federation (IDF), there had been more than 450 million people with diabetes in the world since 2019, then there is expected to increase to roughly 600 million people in the world with diabetes. In addition, diabetes is accounted for about 10% of the world’s population.
By contrast, others think sweeties can put them in a good mood and boost their energy level during a hard-working day, and also help the brain release some feel-good chemicals. However, overusing will always cause health problems.
In conclusion, I totally advocate the idea that many sugary products should be made more expensive in order to encourage people to consume less sugar for the reasons mentioned above.
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and incl 69
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and incl 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
It is obvious that manufacturing a large number of products such as food and drink contain...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, so, still, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27203065134 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88658098611 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651340996169 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2847029327 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375281510445 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137084127581 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137889198385 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24555234845 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171468241541 0.056905535591 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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