Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are more likely to consume high levels of sugar. Since many food and drink products contain sugary that causes many health issues, some believe that sugar-based items should be more expensive so that motivate individuals to purchase less sugary products. In my opinion, I agree with this aforementioned statement and think that this eventually lead to healthy lifestyle.
To begin with, it is well known that sugar-based food and drink products are unhealthy and cause many problems for the immunity system. One of the key methods to encourage people to consume less sugar is to make those products sold in higher prices. This is due to the fact that individuals tend to buy less expensive products especially these days because life is getting harder and the cost of living is higher. For example a recent study shows that some shops had increased the price of sugar items and found that %50 of those products’ sales have decreased.
Moreover another considerable method is if those food and drink items are more expensive, human beings will try to find other alternatives which are basically healthier than those that are full of sugar. For instance, compared to the last two decades, now the sales of brown sugar are increasing more and more after that people found it is way beneficial and unexpensive in the same time. Therefore while increasing the prices of sugary products, humans are more aware of other healthy substitutes.
Inclusion, these days more and more individuals are having snacks that contains high levels of sugar. This essay discussed that if the prices of these products are higher, that will help people avoid those sugar-based food and beverages and be healthier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... to consume high levels of sugar. Since many food and drink products contain sugary ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...hose products’ sales have decreased. Moreover another considerable method is if those...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'those foods'?
Suggestion: this food; those foods
...eover another considerable method is if those food and drink items are more expensive, hum...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...icial and unexpensive in the same time. Therefore while increasing the prices of sugary p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09219858156 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56082389539 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1842067896 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461614843742 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170747544417 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11471449527 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291470433064 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110143612639 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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