Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, environmental problems have become increasingly a controversial subject. Some people believe that the most important issue now is the losing of some kinds of species and plants while others think that there are more crucial problems we should focus on. This essay will discuss both views. In my opinion, I believe that the second view is more reasonable.
On the one hand, with all the environmental problems we are facing now, losing species and plants is the most important one to some individuals. This is due to the fact that these days most of the animals are in danger and the ecosystem is imbalanced now. For example, a recent research showed that only 300,000 of lions are existed now. Therefore, our planet is facing a real problem of losing its creatures.
On the other hand, even though the aforementioned view, other folks think that the melting of the ice pole and the damaging that is occurring to the ozone layer is more essential to consider about. Because as a result of those environmental situations, there is the arising of the sea level. For instance, most of the coastal cities are threatened with floats in the next 10 years. Consequently, those people are thinking of the fate of those cities and their citizens
In conclusion, all the losing wildlife animals and their habitats is a real challenge for some individuals, others seem to be more concerned about other environmental issues. In my opinion, even though the first view is justifiable, the latter is more logical
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94509803922 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76345125197 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525490196078 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4497437417 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31321082442 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988717063288 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627497929087 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187419857587 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804590401622 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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