Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is the case? What can be done to attract local people?
It is true that a number of museums and historical places’s foreign visitors is increasing rapidly while in contrast of the local ones. There are many reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to improve the situation.
There are two main reasons associated with this tendency. Firstly, thanks to the advancement of the mass media and the up gradation of transportation, tourists can access to historical places effortlessly. As a result, this practice is capable of accelerating their understanding about other country’s intangible cultural heritages. Secondly, due to the cultural background similarities, it is problematic for local inhabitants to be given rise to stimulus of their curiousness and enthusiasm on regional galleries and monuments. Consequently, these locations were not only received the adequate attraction but also satisfactory preservation from the citizens and authority.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to alleviate this problem. First of which is since the lack of engagement, museums and historical places could be given additionally recreational facilities in their vicinity such as a restaurant or an amusement park. Moreover, it is necessary for young generation to visit and carry out some researches into historical landmarks. It is perfectly exemplified by the fact that students might be conducted to take part in extracurricular activities which focusing on campaigns aiming at promoting people’s attention to these sites.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the indifference of local people and the desire to travel to indigenous historical locations. However, solutions can be taken to resolve this issue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71595330739 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30480557981 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5828769361 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257310131136 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743698567618 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044063143918 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150095602821 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323364176438 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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