Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on family life and society?
One school of thought holds that the more prosperous and civilized our society is, the more tardily parenthood is delayed. This essay attempts to shed light on the driving factors behind this tendency before elucidating the detrimental consequences of it on domestic life and communal prosperity as a whole.
There are two primary reasons as to why bearing children has no longer been the top priority of couples in recent years. Firstly, pursuing a flourishing career path is chosen by most young generations in the early stage of their life. Specifically, due to the increasingly prohibitive costs of living such as milk and tuition fees, it is immensely reckless for them to not retain a stable financial status, which might put their young kids’ high living standards in jeopardy. Secondly, it takes a long time for them to prepare a sufficient amount of parental knowledge. Typically, in Viet Nam, there are countless training courses, which were introduced to equip people with childcare skills, namely feedings and sex education, thereby avoiding a host of abrupt aberrations while raising their offspring.
When it comes to the effects of this phenomenon, there are two serious repercussions that stem from it. First and foremost, late childbirth could lead to a deterioration in women’s well-being. It can be perfectly explained by the fact that if they get pregnant after the age of 35, they could be at a greater risk of suffering from various serious diseases, such as miscarriage, stillbirth, and even having Down syndrome in their babies. Additionally, when people decide to have children when they are older, it can be seen that their son and daughter would not have abundance time to be enlightened and instructed by their father and mother for their entire life, leading to the engagements in criminal activities of juvenile offenders, which could pose a threat to the security in the vicinity of that residential areas.
In conclusion, there are some underlying motives behind the fact that people tend to start a family later in life, and it is taking a heavy toll on physical health and the development of the community as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08707865169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85717517949 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9180569072 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.916666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240784778878 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663370568543 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05628423783 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124051616411 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187898559826 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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