Many museums charge for admission while the others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages ?
A wide range of museums charge the fee for entrance while it is free for the other museums. This essay will debate on this problem and give my perspective about that.
On the first hand, it can not be dined that going to the museums is not the favor of most youngsters nowadays, especially the historic museums. While museums not only bring them knowledge but also contain the cultural and historic value of a country which plays a vital role to remind the young generation to cherish them. If the government charges for the admission, it does seem to support students to reject to visit museums, instead, they will use their budget for entertainments and so on.
On the other spectrum, getting payment from charging people generate some benefits that should be taken into account. The first one is increasing the budget to pay for curator even rent the guiders. They are necessary because the curator will keep the museum being protected and the guiders will take the responsibilities for delivering message how meaningful the museum is. It is clear to see that if the visitors understand all the things in the museum, they will be more excited let alone the museum now is used for correct function.
Furthermore, art is something special because of its deeply meanings which is implicated behind it.Therefore, charging is one of the best way to show exactly these values. For instance, to see the famous drawings from the artists such as Vinci's, people have to pay a lot so as to get in the museum. However, it is worth because it is the most unique drawing in the world. Imagine, If there is no charge to see these kind of pictures, people can not realise how special they are. That is because people usually bear in mind that what they have to pay to get, it is the precious and valuable things.
In conclusion, although charging for admission for the museums has its own pros and cons, however, in my opinion, the advantages are overweighted and the goverment should continue to apply it.
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevents 56
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 78
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 50
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for goverment to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 56
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em and give my perspective about that. On the first hand, it can not be dined t...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r budget for entertainments and so on. On the other spectrum, getting payment f...
^^^
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... meanings which is implicated behind it.Therefore, charging is one of the best way to sho...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 272, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...uch as Vincis, people have to pay a lot so as to get in the museum. However, it is worth...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
... However, it is worth because it is the most unique drawing in the world. Imagine, If there...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
.... Imagine, If there is no charge to see these kind of pictures, people can not realise how...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... goverment should continue to apply it.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72492836676 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55988929962 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0410900063 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355950022014 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113414977842 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104576774794 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209840178296 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602443027462 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em and give my perspective about that. On the first hand, it can not be dined t...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r budget for entertainments and so on. On the other spectrum, getting payment f...
^^^
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... meanings which is implicated behind it.Therefore, charging is one of the best way to sho...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 272, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...uch as Vincis, people have to pay a lot so as to get in the museum. However, it is worth...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
... However, it is worth because it is the most unique drawing in the world. Imagine, If there...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
.... Imagine, If there is no charge to see these kind of pictures, people can not realise how...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... goverment should continue to apply it.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72492836676 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55988929962 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0410900063 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355950022014 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113414977842 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104576774794 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209840178296 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602443027462 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.