Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both of views and give your own oppinion.
There is a notion which is claimed by some people that the information related to science, business and academy should be shared unlimitedly. However, the issue is not straight foward, and the controversary can also be made against it. This essay will discuss the debate then give my perspectives about it.
On the one hand, it is no doubt that making information public brings a strand of benefits for enterpreneuers in business, citizens and so on. This is because when people have enough essensial information, their decision can be more correct and effective. For instance, an investor wants to invest his or her money into stock market, the thing which is the most important at this time is not only the current information but also the data in the past of the company. That is to say, without assembling the sharing information, it might be risk for the investor to seek out the effective strategies. In another filed such as education and science, information plays a vital role since it is the only manner which people can get to know the educational institutions as well as their habitats. In many cases, if there were some things badly happened, they could have well preparation.
By contrast, too much information publication can lead to the accurate problems. To release official news needed many time in order to investigate, confirm and so on. In addition, information can be taken as a much valuable asset of institutions as it can create significantly compatitive advantages, That is the reason why many companies invest a lot in R&D activity , what they give their all to get here is the information in order to be the pioneers.
In conclusion, sharing information has its own pros and cons to all people. For many, it can be the benefit but it is vice versal for the others in light of afroementioned reasons. In my oppinion, information still should be shared but it is also chosen meticulously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h people can get to know the educational institutions as well as their habitats. ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...oblems. To release official news needed many time in order to investigate, confirm and so...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y companies invest a lot in R&D activity , what they give their all to get here is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, in many cases, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8623853211 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94173036041 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8975004186 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247859454092 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822861381186 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626162655954 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156841952793 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254079656987 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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