Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Museum is a place that archives many civilizations' achievements such as fine arts, ancient sculptures, and so on. While many museums ticket admission fees, others are opened free of charge for visitors. I would agree with those who argue this brings more benefits than drawbacks.
In general, it is undeniable that museums un all over the world are the archive of objects of historical, scientific, or artistic interest, which means they kept a huge humanity's knowledge. And knowledge should not be charged for financial purposes, therefore, this should be publicized to the public to enhance the general knowledge of each individual. Yet, not all museums can be maintained in a long run without finance sponsorship, instead, they ticket visitors a certain amount of money to ensure their operation runs smoothly.
I believe that charging visitors for admission will ease the cost burden that museums are dealing with. For example, most museums have to pay a considerable amount of money for security, cleaning, and electricity fees monthly. Besides those expenses, marketing expenses and purchase costs can not be overlooked. Moreover, marketing charge and requisition fee are two important elements lied on the unique itself which can draw attention from visitors. In addition, the entrance fee is affordable which is normally from 50,000 VND to about 150,000 VND per person. Therefore, the ticketing entrance fee will balance the mutual benefits between museums that have financial resources to bring unique knowledge to the public and visitors who can enjoy watching fine arts unique sculptures and boarding their horizons at the same time.
In conclusion, I would restate that although there still remain problems with admission tickets, in a long run, this will create a win-win situation for tourists and museums.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35540069686 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75598082716 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6256438274 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.230769231 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274145994647 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108480913509 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140992842667 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168455913225 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898971971719 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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