Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that a lot of museums require visitors to pay while others do not. While charging people may have some drawbacks, I would argue that there are more benefits.
On the one hand, admission fees may hamper many people to visit. There always have a lot of local people who cannot afford to buy tickets to visit their local museums. For example, 50 students in the primary school where my mother teaches really desired to enter and discover historical museums in their town last week but their families who mostly are underprivileged could not manage to buy entrance tickets. In other words, the entrance fee acts as a tangible wall between disadvantaged residents and museums and therefore hinders them from getting better understanding of their indigenous history and cultures.
On the other hand, charging could bring some significant benefits for museums. Firstly, it would improve financial status of this institution. With this fund, these museums can regularly upgrade facilities and buy more exhibition items. They could also organize more high quality exhibition events for customers. For instance, the Louvre in Paris, one of largest and most popular museums in the world keep purchasing more and more valuable exhibits thanks to enormous amount of money it receives from tourists. Secondly, having to pay entrance fees makes visitors show more consideration for exhibition items. They might read carefully the description of exhibits that they have to pay for watching, and therefore they have deeper comprehension of values which are underlying in each individual item in a museum.
In conclusion, although admission fees to museums may cause some problems, it seems to me that the advantages of compulsory fees of entrance could be more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26408450704 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73983260471 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.19903213 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278094508422 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931245903807 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530948023841 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166222078405 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399894505902 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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