As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that companies have to make money and I believe that they should also conduct social activities.
On the one hand, if a company grows a good business, it could bring some following benefits. Firstly, such companies pay a considerable amount of money for tax, so the government has more budget, thereby investing in upgrading national infrastructure such as roads and hospitals. For example, thanks for a big amount of tax revenue from successful big firms, Norway is able to build one of the best hospital systems worldwide. Secondly, in well-operating firms, not only there are very few workers being made redundant, but also quite a few new jobs are created annually. This lead to a fact that many people improve living standard, therefore, live happier.
On the other hand, enterprises should accomplish their social obligations to an extent. In terms of environment, they are not allowed to discharge chemical water or dispose of toxic solid waste. They need also cut down emissions in order to prevent the greenhouse effect as well as the global warming. Regarding anthropology, companies could do charity works, which help them both benefit underprivileged people and enhance their company’s public image. For example, Unilever, a well-known brand in Vietnam, has built more than 100 houses for disadvantaged residents in rural areas in the northern Vietnam for the recent 10 years. As a result, numerous households love Unilever and keep purchasing their products.
In conclusion, it seems to me that companies ought to have social duties besides doing business.
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- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? 36
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26274509804 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92251859802 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690196078431 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6879581104 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9230769231 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160459931422 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549552761115 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744454923217 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13558026367 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842432061224 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.