In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
It has been a controversial topic of debate for a long year. People in the metropolis prefer living alone or in a nuclear family to an extended family. From my point of view, this trend is strongly positive. I will discuss two views on the issue in this essay.
On the one hand, one of the main reasons leading to this phenomenon is that living in one or a small family enables people to have privacy or comfort and freedom as their wishes. Individuals can be satisfied doing whatever they want and not influencing others. For a particular example, youngsters who stay alone have a independent life and stay up late, to watch television, hangout with their friends until midnight without receiving any complaints. Besides, a person who is living in small family often experience less chance of the conflicts. Moreover, it is easy for the 2 generation family to have family bonding activities such as share dinners, shopping, trips, picnic and so on.
On the other hand, another reason for supporting this notion. There are few negative points for living in large family is the financial pressure, and face problems and the family members can being compared in among each generations. In contrast, a person runs into troubles about economic or mental issues who has entire supporting from their grandparents, parents and siblings.
To sum up, I think living solitary or in small family have more private space than living in the large family as they can fully freedom and enjoyed themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, i think, in contrast, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92885375494 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65279529487 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5636581884 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9230769231 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291140599673 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970536768104 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085624755722 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181164557577 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264077836598 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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