In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
In today’s world, inhabitants in different countries living in a metro city prefer to live alone or in small family units instead of in large, extended family groups. This situation has both positive and negative aspects influence on their private life.
Given the fact that those who settled with family members in a large city have more freedom to do as they please. Specifically, the individual's life in a house has just one or two generations that either children or young adults live with parents won't interact and influence from the traditions and customs from the older. Besides that, Conditional living is easily improved because of an affordable cost of living by minimum paying for family members.
Moreover, citizens also are supported by financial assistance which creates a number of burdens and unexpected problems. It’s a good chance for an extended family group to overcome troubles from various aspects together, if any physical and mental health problems happen to an individual. Therefore, it's an honorable opportunity to promote a connection between family members. Last but not least, it can minimize the quantity of crime and poverty in communities because people or even neighborhoods can help to prevent this situation.
To sum up, in my perspective, inhabitants settled with family members in huge cities have more benefits on diversity aspects and are easily to promote their career compare with citizens living alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...to do as they please. Specifically, the individuals life in a house has just one or two gen...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ems happen to an individual. Therefore, its an honorable opportunity to promote a c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32034632035 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74958917389 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65367965368 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.066287877 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335078102664 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111308625633 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948943437352 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195977165925 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115419733326 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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