Many Offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishments.
Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem.
Crime is a major cause of concern globally. It has been observed that several culprits end up committing more crimes despite being punished for their first offence. This essay will find out as to why a person is attracted to committing more crimes regardless, of being punished for the same? Furthermore, this essay will find solutions to resolve this issue.
First and foremost, the main reason as to why a person resorts to crime even after facing reparation for the same crime, is primarily because of abject poverty in underdeveloped as well as developing countries, in such countries like Uganda a part of South Africa where people suffer from malnutrition due to dire poverty. In such countries it seems a distant dream to avail of facilities like a proper education, decent housings, medical facilities. So in such countries left with no other option they take up to crime as a last recourse in case of starvation, disease and various other maladies. Therefore, for such people crime becomes a way of life, as they get immune to even strict reparations.
To start with what kind of pragmatic measures would deter a criminal to mend his ways? These actions will certainly come in the form of governments offering various grants and incentives to poor people. Like take for example, the Norwegian countries come with free education policy and even free health insurance throughout the continent for all their citizens. It Is a step towards creating parity amongst all classes. Currently these kind of countries, don’t suffer at large from poverty which entails crime related issues. Therefore it goes without saying,To cut the rate of such large scale crime in any country government mediation is of prime importance.
To sum up., There are various reasons to the soaring rate of crime, nevertheless poverty being the main reason behind crime, which can be tackled only with Government intervention
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, kind of, as well as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1178343949 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71611058019 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5363063313 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207930936083 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667530122272 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700915611087 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132693729122 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884902851132 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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