The many parts of the world. children and teenager are commuting more crimes.why is this happening? How should children or teenagers be punished.
The increasing number of teenagers and children involves criminal activity have been many causes of concern and such various reasons leading to this problem. and some possible solutions and also need to action should be taken against
First of all, there are many reasons and causes for a crime many such factors are affecting the do children and crime the first. broken family because of moral and other family members and also bad relations can cause children to go become violent and lack of communication for example if the lack of discourse in the family can lead to finding another than homes, they lose Unity, trust and understanding and also illiteracy and lack of parental guidance, lack of care and awareness and another teenager influenced by to violence in such media content.and emotional well-being is neglected by parents. For example, television sometimes encourages aggressive or even violent behavior among children because of the show television programs and some online influence peers. and child abuse, someone buling, labour work.
On the other hand, children should be given punishment, to be specific, teenagers who commit Minor crimes such as pickpocketing so given punishment as per require and another New skill rehabilitation. so given guidance and proper counseling and several possible solutions can be this problem. for example, training Center and more important roles in teaching children and provide a safe and supportive environment for children to grow up and also give proper education and also should be careful.
In conclusion, I think the increasing number of crimes among teenagers and many causes to affect negatively impact individuals and society. Therefore this problem must be handled and give punishment according to the low and severity of the crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32280701754 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75556796629 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.164467956 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.7 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318280295638 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125281194503 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710705472936 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20687051864 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465526418873 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.