Many people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with family and friends.
Why does this happen? What are the effects of this on family life and society as a whole?
Nowadays, there are lots of people devote their most of time to job so they cannot spend their time with their family and friends.
There are probably various reasons that could cause people do not have enough time spend with their family and friends. One of the main reasons is that the company and employer squash their staff too much. for example, some jobs are special that do not have accurate time to on duty and off duty so the standard of performance is the quantity and quality of work. However, employer usually sets down too much work to their employees. Thus, they have to squeeze their time with friends, family and children. It is a common phenomenon for people who are busy with work to go out of home before their children getting up and go back home after their children falling asleep.
Having less time to spend with family do affect their own family and society a lot. For their family, paying too much attention to work rather than the family directly induce the detrimental affection to their children. For example, some children have to be sent to their grandparents home even making children become single-parent child. it is very adverse for children to grow up without parents care. Exceeding spoiled or idling children also make bad effect to society. For example, most of youth criminals have an incomplete family, because they do not have correct guidance from their parents.
Overall, for under high pressure, I think it is necessary for us to balance our work and life, especially on the education of children.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-02-04 | MinyiChu | 84 | view |
| 2022-03-31 | idid382021 | 84 | view |
| 2021-07-03 | idid382002 | 89 | view |
| 2021-07-02 | sharanbhullar | 56 | view |
| 2021-06-18 | idid382002 | 84 | view |
- Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree? 11
- The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest? 11
- Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Many people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with family and friends Why does this happen What are the effects of this on family life and society as a whole 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...d employer squash their staff too much. for example, some jobs are special that do ...
^^^
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ng children become single-parent child. it is very adverse for children to grow up...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83834586466 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33539753204 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.171554694 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259560094504 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116237766082 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122253987933 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166583640238 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076563673556 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.