Many people believe that living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to the countryside. To What extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different preferences when it comes to the best place to be live in. However, most of them say that living in the city is more beneficial. Even though I acknowledge that countryside also gives some positive sides, personally I agree with the former statement.
The primary reason why some people prefer to stay in the village is because the villagers are more sociable compared to urban people. This kind of situation is believed as one of the key factors that can lead to the happier and more positive life. In addition, because of minimum land exploitation, the existence and diversity of plants are considerably higher there, which makes the countryside’s air more pure and fresher. That is why some people who have the concern about the healthier lifestyle, especially the elders or the patients under recovery period decide to reside in the suburbs.
On the contrary, I would point out the availability of public facilities which include good transportations, various entertainment spots, and a number of public services that are provided in the cities. For instance, even the villagers come to the city when their family members suffer some illnesses to attain a better health treatment. Not to mention, cities also allow the public to easily reach the shopping centers or cinemas when they need refreshment from the fast-paced daily routine. Other than that, the best educational institutions and companies are usually centered in the cities.
In conclusion, everyone has their own rights to decide whether they want to live in the city or the countryside because both of them have their own advantages to be offered. However, it seems to me that residing in cities provides people with numerous merits. These range from the availability of better public services to reputable educational institutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19256756757 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85822590965 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5771656491 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146596032731 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474903243959 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329212029595 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904312535321 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408818656436 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.