Many people believe that living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to the countryside. To What extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different preferences when it comes to the best place to be live in, however mostly of them say that living in the city is more beneficial. Even though I acknowledge that countryside also gives some positive sides, but for personal reason I agree with the previous statement.
The primary reason why some people prefer to stay in the village is because the villagers more sociable compared to urban people. This kind of situation is believed as one of the key factors that can lead to the happier and more positive life. In addition, because of minimum land exploitation, the existence and diversity of plants are considerable higher there which allow the countryside’s air to become more pure and fresher. That is why some people who have the concern about the healthier lifestyle, especially the elders or the patients under recovery period decide to relocate to the suburbs.
In contrary, the other parties who choose the city life have their strong arguments as well. The prominent one is the availability of public facilities which include good transportations, various entertainment spots, and a number of public services that are provided there. For instance, even the villagers come to the city when their family members are sick to get a better health service. Not to mention, the city also allow the public to easily reach the nearby malls or cinemas when they need refreshment from the fast-pace daily routine. Other than that, the best educational institutions and companies are usually centered in the cities.
In conclusion, everyone has their own rights to decide whether they want to live in the city or the countryside because both of them have their own advantages to be offered. Countryside makes people feel more peaceful and get healthier air. However, the city also allows the people to acquire more advanced public facilities, while getting the better education and career path. For the latter reason, I prefer to live in the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06748466258 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70632821883 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2860733028 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.133333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16557287905 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538232332044 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323292786981 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104824425959 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344479773374 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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