Many people afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. What is your view?
As the number of the crime in public places arises these days, people hesitate to do activities outside of their home. Instead of simple actions, public argue that some remarkable actions need to be taken to suppress the rate of the crime. Personally, I think that both small and big actions should be combined to effectively overcome this matter.
When it comes to big actions, it tends to refer to the roles that can be taken by the authorities. The primary step is the strengthening of security system by putting more surveillance cameras in some strategic spots. Furthermore, the safety agents such as police and security guards also need to patrol more frequently to guarantee the sense of security. Other than that, observing the root causes behind the crime is essential as well. This way, the government will be able to take the more comprehensive policies. It may be by obligating some more serious punishments and strict regulations to the crime perpetrators or even by providing more workplaces for everyone so they will not commit crime just for making a living.
Not only should people fully rely on the authorities, but the public also must take part in suppressing the occurrences of crime by taking some small but effective ways. For instance, when in public places, people need to remain on alert for themselves their surroundings, and their belongings, which allows them to be more cautious of the safety. Moreover, avoiding using some flashy accessories when they are in public place will also be helpful enough to restrain crime. Unless all the parties come in to the action and do their own part, the number of crime occurrences will never be minimized.
Generally, I would assert that both small and big measures should be incorporated to address the increasing crime level. This means that all the elements of society and the government must collaborate to maintain security in public areas, thereby eliminating the fear of doing daily activities outside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04255319149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74221076585 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547112462006 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.205831329 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348273279341 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118782364615 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621802639401 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216931029395 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755329494245 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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