Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed that national authorities should conduct and supervise research in science. In my opinion, I partly agree with this view.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that there are several reasons why governments should control scientific research. Firstly, scientific inventions require a large amount of money. In other words, there are many things to buy in order to use for the experiments, such as the salary of scientists or the high-standard machines. Due to that reason, the national authorities should be the most suitable ones to have responsibilities. Secondly, decisions for applying scientific achievements - which is the most important factor, should be made by the governments. Take the vaccines of the coronavirus as a prime example. Before being published in society, national authorities had to test several times, conduct many experiments to ensure the quality of it on human health.
On the other hand, some people may argue that scientific inventions should be supervised by private organizations. To begin with, the state budget is limited since governments need to control a number of aspects, namely: education, country defenses army, and military forces. Owing to this reason, companies should share the responsibilities so that the qualities and quantities of science research are well-received. Furthermore, with the assistance of many companies, the national authorities not only be helped with the budgets but also the skilled labor forces.
To sum up, despite some concerns about should research of science be carried out and managed by governments, I hold the view that private firms ought to share the responsibilities with the national authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'defenses'' or 'defense's'?
Suggestion: defenses'; defense's
... of aspects, namely: education, country defenses army, and military forces. Owing to thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48091603053 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17874815772 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7568070506 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326582995552 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102618331589 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596776785242 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200712735292 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357425177601 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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