Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring?
What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?
Compared to early 2000s, zoos have undoubtedly lost their popularity as a form of educational, or otherwise, entertainment. As such, it is the belief of numerous people that zoos do not serve a purpose any longer, only succeeding in causing problems, and need to be shut down. In this essay, I will explain these problems and the suggested solutions.
One big problem is the animal cruelty in some zoos, which includes the animal just being there as living species are being forced to live outside of their natural habitat. A prime example of this is a caged in lion via unspeakable methods, which is excruciating to just think about as we, humans, share many characteristics with our fellow mammals, feelings being one of them. An alternative picture could be of open safaris, and the previously displaced species roaming free in these destination zoos.
Another issue, which derives from the one above, is the displacement of these animals from their given habitats, disturbing the Earth’s natural system as a consequence. This is because, animals are born with certain adaptations, and too many of a single species being away from their home for a stretched period of time results in changes in the life-cycle patterns. For instance, too many polar bears being away from the Antarctic means less reproduction and hence a risk of endangering the species and increase in seals in the area. However, what would solve this is returning these animals, which will automatically lead to the restoration of the food-chain and a more natural Earth.
Thus, it can be concluded that, a number of problems brought on by zoos are a cause of animal displacement. In my view, we can resolve any and all future issues by the Animal Rights organisations stepping up and coordinating the return of the innocent beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00993377483 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87644682171 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8076458316 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166833128493 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614478375111 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537730983206 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103869069995 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590355541984 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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