Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone .What do you think are the reasons for this?Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today,most people spend their most of free time with their phones for different purposes.There are some reasons which should be looked through.
Firstly,most people do not want to go out and spend their time with their friends after stressful day.They have just a strong desire to get relaxation without doing any physical activity.At that time their smartphones are great tool to expend their leisure time.They can watch any types of films,concerts,even live ones on the internet.
One more reason for this is that people do not have to allocate money to buy something or wait in a long queue to watch films in the cinema.They can do these activities on their phones without going out home.
There are also advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phone to spend their free time.For example,firstly,positive side of this is that smartphones are easy entertainment for people when they have leisure time.There are different kinds of games on phones,and most people,especially,youngsters prefer playing games on smartphones to going to play stations.
On the other hand,people may lose their socializing skills and feel isolation.
In conclusion,many people would like to use their smartphones to get rid of stress and exhaustion.Although there are some negative effects of this,people can get more relaxation using phones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40384615385 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.71047962178 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591346153846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.109384619 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.333333333 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325818499897 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165177047066 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494304915985 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165177047066 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494304915985 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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