Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
There have been different views regarding providing higher education. While some individuals believe that only young learners with the highest academic results should be offered courses, others would support that universities should educate all people. I completely agree with the latter view.
There are several reasons why universities should only offer classes to young students getting the best performances. The first reason is that knowledge in higher educations is greatly demanding. As a result, students who are intelligent and having good backgrounds would access these lectures easily if not could waste money and time. For instance, Ha Noi university of science and technology in Viet Nam would discard 600 learners every year because these people could not understand difficult content. Moreover, as the curriculum has a huge number of assignments, young people would have enough time to complete them rather than the elders. Adults have to work daily to make money to cover the monthly costs and they do not have much time to concentrate on studying.
Despite the reasons mentioned above, I would believe that schools should offer classes to citizens regardless of their ages as well as academic outcomes. Firstly, having a desire to gain new lectures should be encouraged. Many old people were not able to continue their educational paths because of insufficient finance in the past. After many years, they accumulate enough money to participate in courses because they want to update precious knowledge, and know how to use machines or robots that they have never known before through learning in universities. Therefore, the economy of a nation would develop significantly. Secondly, academic performance is not the only factor to success. If universities use marks merely to assess learners, young people could not improve necessary skills such as teamwork skills.
In conclusion, while some people would argue that higher education only offer young students with the best points, I believe that they should provide for all people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39252336449 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68556785906 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3438609048 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309987838542 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894677458426 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825981523542 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220252156984 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627156951128 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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