More and more people buy a wide range of household goods such as television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that these days there is an increase in the number of people who purchase a variety of household appliances including television, microwave oven or refrigerator, etc. Although there are some demerits related to this trend, I would argue that there are far more benefits.
On the one hand, there are some negative effects if people closely depend on technological equipment. Regarding health aspects, high - tech equipment may have some negative impacts, which seriously affect human’s health. For example, there have been concern that due to the microwave radiation, people may contract brain cancer if they frequently expose to microwave oven. In terms of financial perspective, these electronic devices are usually costly to buy, which may put many families under pressure of being debt. For example, in Viet Nam many households have to pay by instalments with certain interest rate when it comes to buying these commodities.
Despite the negative side mentioned above, I believe that this tendency is a positive development. Firstly, as these appliances have multi-functions, they are extremely convenient for housewives to use. For instance, a modern cooker can be used for cooking a wide range of various recipes such as rice, soup or cake …. Secondly, electronic devices are automatically operated and could be controlled from remote, which helps to reduce significantly the hours that people have to spend on doing the chores. For example, one person can use vacuum machine to clean the floor whiling washing clothes and cooking soup at the same time. As a result, this helps to liberate people, especially women from a burden of housework to participate in social work and have more contribution to society.
In conclusion, while I recognize the disadvantages of using technological devices, I consider this habit consumption to be a positive development overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32441471572 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96225139604 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6453487249 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234089730332 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692200227288 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042724574126 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126819801489 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286286324503 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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