Many people think that museums will be replaced by technology as most information can be found free online. Others believe that museums are still important.
Will museums no longer be needed in the future?
Is this a positive development?
It is often argued by some that, technology can provide most information online and thereby museums would be replaced. However, many others think museums are inevitable. This essay explains the importance of museums in the future and the negative impact of substitute technologies.
Museums are the counterpart of national history which showcase milestones of growth and development, vulnerable records of many. Such monuments play a major role in the national economy and tourism development. Museums have a leading role in education and research centres through exact information and displays of materials and proper explanations. For example, the world-famous teak museum in Kerala state enhances the wide variety of plants and plantation methods of teak in a proper way by workers in the museum. Owing to that absence of museums may mitigate the social, cultural, academic and national development of future generations when we rely on online technology.
On the other hand, innovative technology and online websites are given ample information regarding certain areas. It may deliver images and detailed data of things in past times. Along with this, such sites might give extra knowledge from different aspects, various persons, and diverse views. People who believe in online service thinks this sort of evidence would flourish the aspects of a museum than the original one. Even though free online information would not be reliable and the credibility of data would be suspicious in many cases.
To sum up, technology in online service about museums might be imperative in modern world those who are not able to visit museums. Though the role of museums would be necessary and this replacement would be detrimental effects in upcoming years in many ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, for example, sort of, in many cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38129496403 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77031668244 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1897701585 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442097329618 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136990103344 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899111612442 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282739136623 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905206378086 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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