Many people today are worried about young children using video games. What problems
might these games cause, for children and society as a whole? How could these problems be
reduced?
Using video games by children is a cause of widespread concern today. It can cause a number of problems that has undesirable effects on population, but also some straightforward measures we can take to protect against it.
Perhaps the worst problem stemming from this is the health impact. If children spent lots of time in front the computer, playing games, they would potentially lose their healthiness as a result of shortage in physical activity. For example, they might catch number of diseases, ranging from obesity to diabetes. Increasing the number of unwell people would have devastating effects on the whole society in different ways. Handling people who need medical care would have financial and moral consequences simultaneously, should be considered as an important issue. In addition, the more ill and disabled children, the less effective work force in the future, which will lead to falling down in whole nation productivity and progression. A further problem is losing communication skills which consequently can cause major difficulties in interactions between people that eventually would lead to social disintegration.
Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is controlling the condition by parents and care givers, using variety of methods such as laying down restrictions in screen time, or encouraging kids to do exercise and have outdoor activities as well. In addition, we should raise awareness of the risks among the children via publicity and school education.
Overall, the problems caused are both medical and social, and solutions should involve coordinated action by individuals, schools, and the state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, in addition, such as, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52195121951 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00160575705 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69756097561 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7003270439 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.777777778 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199019685793 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08720094958 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916706936672 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11278206781 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676565083562 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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