Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes ? What are the solutions ?
In contemporary settings, safety measures in society become prominent. However, many individuals feel unsafe at all sites wheather they are at home or going outside. Thus, there are plenty of reasons due to which this criteria is happened. Yet, there are also preferable measures to overcome such issues. Couple of views are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, safety become major concern to every individual and there are many masses who think, they are not safe either at home or outside due to plethora of reasons. Firstly, major cause is proliferation in crime rate. Because, in present era, number of offenders become increases day by day which is majorly due to insecurity by legal authorities. Because, law makers do not provide enough attention towards security of society. For instance, girls are more insecure in present society due to increase count in sexual harrasment, molestation and rape cases. There was case which came from small town of Delhi, in which 14 years younger girl was rapped by neighbour which proves that she was not safe even at home. Apart from that, another major cause is robbery. In this y, thievery cases are rising which is majorly due to unemployment and poverty. There are number of incidents which reveals such stealing cases wheather in open market or at homes. As a result, due to these issues, individuals feel insecure in society.
On other hand, this phenomenon is overcome with few of solutions. First and foremost measure is responsibility of legal authorities. Because, they play dominant role in security services of society. In this criteria, there is necessity to pass strict laws against offenders to restrict offences regards molestation, rape and so on. If they pass strict penalty status against such crimes. Thus, this may overweight crimes. Furthermore, legal communities have need to provide employment and funds to those individuals who are under poverty line. Due to which, they become viable to fulfill their necessities which prohibits thievery cases.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, although there are number of issues which results insecurity in public at all places. Yet, these issues also become overcome with prominent methods.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...due to insecurity by legal authorities. Because, law makers do not provide enough atten...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is responsibility of legal authorities. Because, they play dominant role in security se...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es regards molestation, rape and so on. If they pass strict penalty status against...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, apart from, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2808988764 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71401232423 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558988764045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4327306314 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.24 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131728032832 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336922987662 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546695666345 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768204267317 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464698287046 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...here are plenty of reasons due to which this criteria is happened. Yet, there are al...
^^^^
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...due to insecurity by legal authorities. Because, law makers do not provide enough atten...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is responsibility of legal authorities. Because, they play dominant role in security se...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ole in security services of society. In this criteria, there is necessity to pass st...
^^^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es regards molestation, rape and so on. If they pass strict penalty status against...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, apart from, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2808988764 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71401232423 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558988764045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4327306314 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.24 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131728032832 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336922987662 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546695666345 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768204267317 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464698287046 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.