Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this?Do you think it is a good thing or a bad thing?
aging is a natural process which happens to all the living creatures, including human beings. however, many people look for different ways to run away from this truth by changing the way they look. this essay will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and whether it could have positive or negative consequences for them.
As people grow old, they feel they do not have the same opportunities as their younger self, so they look for ways to look younger. For instance, as some women age, they start to think that they look less attractive to other people. Fewer people are interested in interacting and establishing a relationship with them. so they feel secluded from society, which could lead them to a stressful time in their life. this stress is the reason behind many people going through a midlife crisis period at some point in their life, in which they try to compensate for their insecurities by doing things that younger people do, like buying a sports car. Furthermore, getting older remind people of the inevitability of their demise, so they are trying to distract themselves from this unavoidable truth.
Nevertheless, while efforts for looking younger could have some short-term benefits for people, like feeling better about themselves, if they are not careful, the consequences could be catastrophic in the long-term. this is because if they pursue healthy ways of looking better, like exercising, they will become happier and healthier. however, if they go after artificial ways to look better, like plastic surgery, not only will they lose a considerable amount of money, but also they might endanger their life.
In conclusion, people try to look younger because they do not want to be treated differently and partly by doing this, they are distracting themselves from their death. Additionally, depending on the actions that they take, the consequences could be harmful or beneficial for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24840764331 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72610162804 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7013331308 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278092948604 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112795577683 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106662334947 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187993597978 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983979398577 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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