People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effects does it have on an individual and on society?
Nowadays, people from many countries tend to get less sleep than they used to, because of the changes in their lifestyle. this essay will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and the implications that it will have for people’s personal and social life.
The changes that modern life have made to the way people live caused this shortened sleep duration. people do different activities before going to sleep, which has lowered the quantity and quality of their sleep. For instance, employees bring their work home, or people watch television programs instead of sleeping. furthermore, because of the hustle and bustle of their life, they are stressed out throughout the day, depriving them of sleep due to excessive thinking about their problems.
Additionally, sleep deprivation poses severe problems for people and the ones around them. it affects their performance of their daily activities. For example, research shows students who get less than six hours of sleep, perform poorly in their tests in comparison with the students who get enough sleep. furthermore, sleeping less than the recommended amount could have destructive effects on one’s behavior. this is because people who do not get enough sleep, usually experience mood swings, which might cause confusion for people around them and destroy their relationship.
In conclusion, the problems which modern life has brought for people have been altering the sleep patterns of them. Consequently, they have been experiencing a decline in their performance and changes the way they behave, which could have complication for their relationship with their friends and family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6015625 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70458944706 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5273667366 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307865864417 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134774722279 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836867549551 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206460145858 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600624005542 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.