Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that the government should make efforts to help the condition of its people by bettering different aspects of the country. However, while some people believe that all areas are equally important, I would argue that having a strong economy should be a priority.
One of the arguments that people who believe progressing in all areas should have the same priority is that they realize that money by itself can not bring happiness for people. For instance, we all probably have heard or seen news about a celebrity who despite having fame and fortune suffers from clinical depression or some other mental disorder problem. so the argument goes, all of the human needs are equally important, not just the ones that can be accommodated by money.
However, while only focusing on methods for gaining more money is guaranteed to lead us to our doom, having a solid financial state should be a priory. This is because most of the human's basic needs can only be accommodated by money. Therefore, the government's primary goal should be to help people to have comfortable living conditions because otherwise, people might not survive to care about their other needs. For instance, in some countries, people can not even afford to buy food and sometimes starve to death. so we should first focus on meeting people's basic needs like food, shelter, and medicine.
To sum up, while money can not solve every problem that people have, but it is the remedy for their basic daily needs. so the government should take action to develop all areas of the country, with special attention to the economy because people's survival is dependent on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02142857143 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45208938396 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.901684354 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113450876767 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471402399375 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223385964035 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763111411236 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00849058090144 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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