Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, watching sports programs has become very popular. Nevertheless, some people believe it is not a smart use of free time. I only partially agree with that statement because I think we should see it from different perspectives.
Firstly, watching sports might not be the best way to spend our free time. This is because there are so many other activities which can be more beneficial to us than watching sports competitions. For instance, if a person chose to read a book in his or her free time, they would probably gain knowledge which they can use in their lives to cope with their problems. however, if they went to see a football match, for instance, they would not learn anything that is of practical use.
On the other hand, watching sports matches, whether by watching television or going to the stadium, is usually a social activity. people often watch these games with their family or friends, which could be an excellent opportunity for them to connect deeper with their loved ones. In contrast, they often do activities which are only about themselves. For example, they watch the movie they like or listen to music they think is good. so watching a sports program could be a break from all the activities that people do in their leisure time by themselves.
To sum up, I think, compared with watching sports, other activities might help us to develop skills and knowledge which could be useful in our lives. however, most of them do not help us with our social life. so we can see watching sport as an opportunity to spend time with the people they care about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85920577617 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5167504375 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527075812274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3573378868 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26107424843 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102815610949 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699561643946 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181566006539 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593242398439 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.