In many places, people’s lifestyle is changing rapidly and this affects family relationship. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that in many places, the aspects of city-dwellers' lifestyle is changing sharply, having effects on their family relationship. While lifestyle having wild swings helps people unwind or be comfortable because of collecting new somethings, the dramatic lifestyle change can trigger several impacts on family relationships. I fully concur with the second view.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that changing suddenly the lifestyle makes people take it easy or feel satisfied when possessing new products. Coming with up a definition of variable lifestyle is challenging, but empirical studies in VietNam newspapers say that the thing that can make people escape the pressure and stress being that changing their lifestyle to be suitable for their needs. In other words, people will alter their habits to find new something, which leads to new experiences, and unexpected feelings. A good example is my girlfriend, who alter frequently his lifestyle to get out of work pressure.
Despite the mentioned arguments above, I think that members’ lifestyles varying suddenly can have a detrimental effect on family relationships. In reality, it is undoubted that people have to splash out to run the fashion tendency. They are willing to make purchase a lot of shoes, and high-priced jewelry. Sometimes, the inspiration for their lifestyle from like-minded people may stir their interest to pursue it. After a short time, they feel tedious and they aspire to change their lifestyle. For this reason, other members of the family can feel dissatisfaction owing to the waste of money. As a result, this results in bridging the gap between their family relationship. For instance, my sister who always chases modern fashion style, but my parents do not really into this, then their relationship is affected dramatically.
In conclusion, based on the arguments mentioned above, from my perspective, I advocate for the second view. Whereas altering lifestyle regularly can make people feel comfortable, a sudden change of lifestyle can cause a lot of effects on family relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, second, so, then, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00233150907 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0320846867 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.117647059 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242434848237 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768114437877 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565499612203 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152156391157 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463837631473 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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